LO2:

Task Five:

This is a scene from Step Brothers staring Will Ferrell And John C. Reily, the clip i have chosen to remake and edit is the famous dinner table scene. In involves four characters,dinner settings and a family dinning room in order to recreate the scene. that lasts just over four minites. 

Risk Assessment

Storyboards-The entire scene is entirely comprised of mid shots (MS) and two shots (TS). the opening shots is a two shot of Dale (Ryan applying ketchup to his dinnerthis proceded by a series of three cosecutive mid over shoulder shots befor linking back to futher mid shots (MS) during the lengthy disscusion over "fancy sauce" the shot last approximatley 3-4 seconds in order for the viewer to absorb the most information from what is being depicted on screen. During this scene i will make use of jump cuts (JC) to insure that my remake is as closely inkeeping with the conventions of the original as possible.



Date&Days-Friday 23rd March 2012

Contacts-Sarah Ives-Rider

Email:sive@henleycol.ac.uk

SCRIPT

NOTE:

·         Shot changes almost every line.

·         Mid shots, over shoulder shots, two shots.

Robert:

Dale that’s enough ketchup, come on dale.

Dale:

 I like it.

Nancy:

Dale I don’t know if you… You might want to try this, I make a sauce, we call it fancy sauce

Brendan:

mm, for me.

Nancy:

That, um, Brendan really likes with his chicken nuggets…

Brendan:

It’s my fancy sauce.

Nancy:

Well when Brendan finishes, um, I’ll give you some of this, it’s- it’s ketchup and mayonnaise mixed together

Brendan:

mm, it’s so good.

Dale:

 I want some fancy sauce.

Nancy:

 Yeah.

Brendan:

Not, no, I’m using it.

Robert:

 Looks good.

Dale:

Can I have fancy sauce?

Nancy:

Of course, heh, of course, um…

Brendan:

 I’m using it right now

Nancy:

 Okay, so let’s just-

Robert:

You wanna try it?

Dale:

 Yeah

Nancy:

 Let’s just let him try some

Dale:

Yeah I really would like some

Brendan:

 Just one last spoonful

Nancy:

I think- I think you’ve got enough there Brendan. So here you go

Robert:

(sigh of relief)

Dale:

Thanks

Nancy:

 It’s ketchup and mayonnaise

Dale:

Urgh, uh-uh, I don’t like it. It smells weird.

Robert:

I’ll try some

Nancy:

Okay, you want some?

Robert:

Sure, absolutely

Nancy:

Okay

Robert:

You don’t mind, do you Brendon?

Nancy:

Brendan, Brendan

Brendan:

 I’m not comfortable

Robert:

No it’s okay, it’s probably not good after fish anyway

Dale:

But my dad’s king of the castle so if he wants fancy sauce he should-

Robert:

No it’s oaky

Brendan:

If he wants fancy sauce he should make his own batch

Nancy:

So you know what? Today, when you were driving around Dale was telling me that he’s really into kung-fu, and I was telling him that you’re really into kung-fu as well

Brendan:

 I have a green belt. Read it and weep.

Dale:

 I don’t believe in belts. There should be no ranking system for toughness, but one time I wrestled a giraffe to the ground with my bare hands.

Robert:

 That’s not true Dale, don’t be ridiculous

Nancy:

So Dale, what have you been up to recently?

Dale:

I manage a baseball team

Nancy:

Oh, little league?

Dale:

Fantasy league.

Dale:

Why don’t you take a picture it’ll last longer

Robert:

Why don’t you stop being so confrontational, Dale

Dale:

I’m not the one staring at me!

Robert:

So Brendan, how about you? I know you used to work at Petsmart

Brendan:

That’s right Mr Doback

Robert:

Call me Robert

Brendan:

That’s right Robin

Robert:

It’s Robert

Nancy:

Brendan’s a really talented person, a very gifted singer

Brendan:

I’m really, really good.

Dale:

How good

Brendan:

 I’ve been called ‘The Songbird’ of my generation, by the people who have heard me, that good.

Nancy:

The only trick is, Brendan’s very particular about who he sings in front of, like I’m his mom for example and I’ve only heard him sing twice

Dale:

 It’s funny that you say that, ‘cause, I can sing too. I’ll sing right now.

IF YOU WANNA GET DOWN ON THESE HAIRY BALLS,
WHY DON’T YOU JUMP RIGHT IN?

Robert:

HEY!

Dale:

 IT’S A CROTCH PARTY RIGHT UP IN HERE,
WHY DON’T YOU LICK ON THIS BIG JOHN

Robert:

 Dale! Stop it! Stop it, Stop it!

Brendan:

That’s cute, I remember when I had my first beer

Dale:

That’s so funny the last time I heard that I laughed so hard I fell of my dinosaur!

Robert:

Stop, stop right now, back off. It’s alright, it’s okay.

(Brendan cries)

Dale:

 He said a mean thing first.

Robert:

Look guys, you know what, sleeping arrangements. It’s gonna be different, but because Dale refused to give up his office drum set, you two… Dale, you and Brendan are going to have to share a room, it’s just temporary.

Brendan:

 Mom, we didn’t talk about this.

Nancy:

Well it’s going to be an exciting adventure.

Robert:

Do you want to show him the room, Dale, and where he can put his stuff?

(Dale huffs)

Nancy:

That’s very kind

Dale:

Goodnight Nancy, and hey listen, I like to have a lot of fresh fruit around me and chocolate chips in my pancakes. K? Write that down, so you don’t forget.

Robert:

 She won’t forget

Dale:

She’s mom now, so…

Brendan:

Goodnight mom, goodnight Mr Doback

Robert:

 Goodnight Brendan

(Brendan and Robert awkwardly shake hands after hesitantly debating whether to hug or shake hands, Brendan just walks off)